Suspense drives fiction. Arcs stretch suspense. An arc of suspense
is the technique of making the reader aware s/he has no knowledge of what
will happen next and teasing her/him with the possibilities.
Think of arcs as fireworks that are structured so that the reader triggers
them as she walks along. Some of them are rockets that dart off in
a definite direction. Some are aerial bombs that burst and go out in
many directions. Some are quiet. Some are loud. Some disappear
over the horizon and cannot be found for a very long time. Some can
never be found again.
The danger of course is that if you over-stretch an arc, creating too much
tension, it becomes melodrama. The challenge is to get as much tension
in as possible without going over that limit.
The first thing the writer has to do is to set up the launch, to make sure
it goes off with just the right amount of explosive and heads in the right
direction. The main goal of the launch is to give the reader momentum
and direction to follow the arc out to where it lands.
GENERAL RULE: Always have at least one arc launched and flying over
or through a scene, any scene. If there aren't any, or if they are
too high up in the air to be noticed immediately, get some going.
PROHIBITION: Never fail to pay off an arc of suspense. This is
a fundamental breach of the writer/reader contract. Your readers will never
TRICK: Pay off small arcs early. This establishes credibility for you
with readers, who will trust you with the longer arcs.
TYPES OF ARCS:
1] Secrecy & mystery. Colonel Mustard
is dead and there's hardly a clue, and our protagonist has to find the killer.
This is not limited to mystery genre (For example, Prince of Tides is driven
by the mystery of why Savannah attempted suicide) and includes minor mysteries.
2] Unfinished scene. "Do you want to know what I
was dreaming?" says a character at the beginning of "Outside" a story
by Jessica Treadway in The Atlantic. The response comes: '"Wait here,"
he said to Steven, before his lust to know could betray him." ' And
the reader stays around to find out what the dream was.
3] Time pressure arc. Beating the clock.
"My mother will die in three months, and we will not be reunited unless I
4] arc to the next chapter. Connecting rope
5] the incidental arc. This is an arc that
has nothing directly to do with the story but advances it because of its
incidental interest. Vonnegut tells of one of his students writing
about a nun who had a piece of dental floss stuck in her teeth, so that everybody
who heard it ended up fishing around in his own mouth. Also, Joads
repairing broken down car pp. 157-62 in Grapes of Wrath.
6] Arc of the bizarre. Sometimes a story is
so off kilter and kindled with a potential for the bizarre that it fills
itself with lightning and becomes its own sort of stand alone, off the shelf
arc machine. Wejumpka, by Rick Bass, Kafka's Metamorphosis. The
television series Twin Peaks ended up proving you could do the whole
thing with arcs alone (at least for the better part of a single season).
There was no story, only a continuous series of arcs of the bizarre that
kept people tuning in.
7] hubris arc [defying the gods] "I'm simply the
best. I can't be beaten." "I'm just lucky, I guess. I never
get caught. Why, I can get away with anything." Ever since the
days of the earliest Greek theaters, the audience has stuck around to watch
the hubris character's undoing
8] arc of fate: Will the character be able
to break out of the road that seems to be assigned to her? Will the
bad guy break and do a good thing? Will the good guy be tempted to
do a bad thing?
9] off-pov arc. tanks massing, killer stalking,
intercuts of ominous developments. Will it happen or won't it?
When will the character find out? Will the protagonist screw up the
escape? or the windfall? The reader here has the benefit of being
able to see around corners the protagonist can't see. The tension
comes from the reader's desire to communicate superior knowledge to the character
and the inability to do so. This is different from character-driven
tension, such as solving a mystery or working through guilt, where the character
leads the reader to the site of the tension and it unfolds on both of them
10] arc of justice. A bad thing happens to
a good character and you want to stay around to see if the right wins out,
and if it doesn't then a new arc is created.
11] arc of mistaken identity. Cirano
de Burgerac. Shakespeare in Love.
12] arc of the one hidden prohibition.
Bluebeard the pirate: to new wife – don’t look in the closet!
Lot’s wife and Eurydice in mythology – don’t look back! You know they
are going to, so you stay tuned to find out when, how, and what happens when
1- Malcolm Wedge was
a very nice man. [Boring, Ho-Hum. Who cares? Even if you
are about to tell a poetic story about a lovely man who did wonderful things
in his life, nobody is going to follow along to find out]
2- Malcolm Wedge was
a very nice man. Really, he was. [Adding the emphasis sentence gets
something going. Is there reason to doubt Malcolm's niceness? Turn
the page and find out.
3- Malcolm Wedge was
really a nice man. In most respects, that is. This one
is more openly ominous. But it need not pay off in Malcolm Wedge turning
out to be a Norman Bates character.
4- Did you ever notice
that anybody you ask will tell you what a nice man Slade Wedge is, but then
right away, they will look off in another direction, or find something else
to do? Now we've got some arcs going! But now, you've got readers
who will follow you anywhere.
And while we are talking about arcs of tension and how to build them, here
is a way to add an arc with just one word: change Malcolm's name to 'Slade!'
Right from the beginning, people are going to question whether anyone named
Slade could ever be a very nice man.
The writer-benefit is that by structuring the arc, you've given yourself
a distinct push in the direction your story is going to take you. All
you have to do is follow it and your story goes forward. In fact, some
writers begin a story simply by starting with an arcing first sentence.
They slip into it from there and find their way to the payoff, leaving a
story that creates itself in their tracks.
IN-CLASS ARC OF SUSPENSE EXERCISE
Write a simple descriptive sentence about a person, then rewrite it to have
a twist that leads the reader to want to know more, then rewrite it again
to become a sentence that is so provocative, the reader MUST read on.
ARC OF SUSPENSE ASSIGNMENT
Write a story (2-5 pages) using as many of the arc-of-tension devices we've
described as you think you can get away with. Have fun with it.
Tempt us to follow you down promising or unpredictable paths, to turn the
page, to wonder and need to know.
It is important that you not disappoint us by failing to pay off an arc,
but some arcs can be paid off sooner, while with others, you could make us
wait and read on.